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November.17 by ~TearsOFblood420:iconTearsOFblood420:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional


One year ago tomorrow
my life took a violent twist
for better or for worse
the story plays upon my wrist

First love first heartbreak
the pain was all to much
but i did not realize that then
so i was taken over by your touch

Dead roses everywhere
as i lay in bed thinking of you
held back tears start to run
and i`m not sure what to do

Was it love or lust on your side
i think we both know
but i was always true to you
my love could only grow

Are you happy now
with her by your side
do you not think of me
only her to be your bride

Do i ever cross your mind
when the day is gone and died
or am i gone totally
at least i can say i tried

As long as your hearts content
and happiness fills your soul
thats all that matters to me
even tho without you
the world is strange and cruel

My Love for you is eternal
i`ll say my prayers goodnight
cut my wrist for good this time
and turn out my bedroom light
©2003-2009 ~TearsOFblood420
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yeah i`m just postin this a day early but it makes sense since the poem says tomorrow...

to shawn... i love you :tears:
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~TwiztidSerialKillinJ:iconTwiztidSerialKillinJ: Nov 16, 2003, 4:47:49 PM
Slit the wrist so you may watch something besides your face cry..
~ton-dieu-noir:iconton-dieu-noir: Nov 16, 2003, 5:50:53 PM
this is beautiful... so much emotion....... let ourselves bleed out, spillin' our tears on the people below.......

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You stare at me like I'm a vitamen, on the surface you hate but you know you want me.
~TearsOFblood420:iconTearsOFblood420: Nov 16, 2003, 6:50:24 PM
thankyou thankyou thankyou:-)
~BleedingEyes000:iconBleedingEyes000: Nov 17, 2003, 2:11:26 PM
Aw Em, I'm so sorry. Shawn is an ass. He must die. die in a pool of blood and guts. buahaha Anyways. I love you emily and i'm glad you are slowly getting over Ol' Shawny boy. You have Jack now (don't mention taking a base on my bed) heh. Wow. Have the years flown. I remember the day we met. Us being shy lil girls not knowning what the future held for us...Not knowing you would lose your virginity to a liar at age 13 and as for me, finding the love of my life at age 13. 13...good ol' 13. the year in life for me would take a twist and you also. 1 year this day, you met this liar. You didn't know what was going to happen. You didn't know you would be hurt. You didn't know that by you being hurt, would bring your best friend since kindergarden(?i think?) closer to you and sharing precious memories and the future with her. I love you Emily Rose Cross, now and forever. I can't wait to walk down the isle with you on my left and my father on my right to the love of my life (hopefully gary (= ). that is my dream. Well, this is the time where i depart and call you on the phone.

Love Always and forever,
~+Chelsea Elizabeth+~
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